From: Rich Hawryluk [rhawryluk@pppl.gov]
Sent: Wednesday, September 04, 2002 6:25 PM
To: Wayne Reiersen
Cc: hneilson@pppl.gov; mwilliams@pppl.gov
Subject: Re: NCSX SEMP

Wayne,
Thanks for the update.  It is much improved.  I do have an 
overarching concern.  This document gets into project control issues 
(cost, schedule, and monitoring, including PCS etc.), which I do not 
think belong here.  That is covered elsewhere and repeated here, at 
least in part.

The other concern is that the relationship of this document to others 
is not clear, in particular, Lab procedures.  Also the Engineering 
Work Planning document addresses many other issues customarily 
associated with systems engineering and they are not addressed here. 
Maybe all that is needed is to state that those aspects are covered 
by the Engineering Work Planning document and that will be used to 
address these issues.  Is that your intent?

I have sent Mike a copy of this to get his comments since he is the 
Lab's custodian of the relevant Engineering procedures.

Rich


>Rich,
>
>Thank you for your careful review of the SEMP.  The SEMP has been revised in
>response to comments from you and others.  Draft E is currently being
>circulated for project review.  Attached is a copy of Draft E along with my
>responses to your previous comments.  Please let me know if you have any
>questions or concerns.
>
>Regards,
>
>Wayne
>
>
>Wayne T. Reiersen
>Princeton Plasma Physics Laboratory MS08
>PO Box 451
>Princeton NJ 08543
>
>609/243-2479 (phone) 609/243-3030 (fax)
>
>
>Attachment converted: Macintosh HD:NCSX-PLAN-SEMP-00-dE.doc 
>(WDBN/MSWD) (0004E314)
>Attachment converted: Macintosh HD:Response2RJH Comments.doc 
>(WDBN/MSWD) (0004E315)


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